litcritter originals

We're taking advantage of the time afforded by the holidays to critique new stories the LitCritters have written. The genre assignment is fantasy, and over the week we're taking up the following stories:

The Silent Season by Alexander Osias
The Legend of Dhul BaqTala, Last of the TiqBarang by Andrew Drilon
The Clockwork Dragon’s Heart by Vin Simbulan
Glass by Nikki Alfar
Bound by Nikki Alfar
Spider Hunt by Kenneth Yu
Light by Kate Aton-Osias
Messiah by Dean Francis Alfar
Remembrance by Dean Francis Alfar

The point, as usual, is to help make the texts more effective, give them needed polish, and prep them for publication in various markets.